Welcome to the English 11 blog! You'll be happy you visited, and you'll see why soon:)
Today we had 5 poems of various themes and ideas, to read together and discuss as a class, from our Inside Poetry Texts. They were;
"Backwards Journey" (pg.4),
"Fairy Tales" (pg.6),
"Islands" (pg.7),
"Child who Walks Backward" (pg.7), &
"I've always lived across the Street" (pg.11).
Just to review, when we read or dissect a poem there are many steps to consider so that we understand the poem as fully as possible; see your notes from class.
I've created the acronym E.L.F a poem to help remember what to do with our poems studied.
E - Explicate (means to find and label as many poetic devices as possible in the poem.
(Use YOUR A-Z dictionary of devices to help you!)
L - Literal (what is the surface meaning, literally?)
F - Figurative (what is the deeper meaning suggested by the author, or the theme?)
We did E.L.F the 5 poems partially as a class, but your assignment is to complete each one. As a bonus for visiting the blog today, I have posted the complete assignment answers below for the first poem
"Backwards Journey" so that you will have a full example done for you plus one poem crossed off your list for h/w! SEE! Pays to check the blog for these bonus hints and tips...saves you time too:) The other 4 poems to be E.L.F'ed are due tmrw. and we will go over the answers in class together so be prepared!
"A Backwards Journey"
Explicate: "say, seven, still, serious..." (lines 1 and 2) ALLITERATION
"Dutch Cleanser" (throughout poem) ALLUSION to something famous, capitals
No periods or punctuation in this poem - POETIC LICENSE
"dutch cleanser can, woman, can, woman" (lines 9-13) REPETITION
" The woman led me" (line 14) FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
" ...through the
eye of the mind" (line 15) PERSONIFICATION
" ....my thought could
hold on to" (line 16-17) PERSONIFICATION
"Un
til she was the smalles
t poin
t...
to" CONSONANCE with T sounds
"Broke...delicate" (line 19) JUXTAPOSITION opposites in one line
"Smash" (line 21) ONOMOTOPAIEA word that is spelled like the sound it makes
ANY Others I missed? Jot them down and lets share tomorrow in class:)
Literal: The literal meaning of this poem when I read it for the first time, is basically a boy discussing how he pays serious attention to the Dutch Cleanser can pictures.
Figurative: I feel the deeper meaning of this poem, is related to childhood imagination and how as children we can pay attention to things and go deeper into the layers but as we grow older we are impatient and less likely to take time to do this (ie: get to know someone rather than judge them based on looks or first impressions). The author might be saying that ....If more people took time to delve deep rather than dismiss things, it might be a different world.